Book review of Dragons in the Clouds: First Edition

by David Blair (Author)

In David Blair's Dragons in the Clouds: First Edition, a world where dragons roam freely is plunged into chaos. A reign of terror by vicious dragons prompts King Albion to order their extermination. However, the powerful wizard Merlinius, protector of a friendly dragon family, defies the king, saving them with a spell of weightlessness. Meanwhile, Merlinius' ambitious apprentice harbors a secret plan for the dragons hidden deep within a mountain, setting the stage for a devastating conflict. A young boy, also befriended by a dragon, finds himself caught in the crossfire of a dragon war that threatens not only the kingdom, but the very fabric of existence. This epic fantasy weaves a tale of loyalty, betrayal, and the fight for survival against a backdrop of majestic, airborne creatures.

Dragons in the Clouds: First Edition
4.1 / 49 ratings

Review Dragons in the Clouds

"Dragons in the Clouds: First Edition" by David Blair is a captivating read that whisks you away to a world teeming with magic, adventure, and, of course, dragons! The story immediately grabs you with its charming opening, a father sharing a fantastical tale with his young daughter – a clever framing device that instantly sets a warm and inviting tone. This isn't just a children's story, though; it cleverly weaves a deeper narrative about environmental responsibility and the consequences of hasty decisions. The premise – a king ordering the extermination of all dragons – sets the stage for a thrilling conflict with high stakes.

The book deftly balances action and heartfelt moments. We get exciting dragon battles in the sky, a wizard’s ingenious (albeit slightly flawed) plan, and the courageous acts of both a young boy and his dragon companion. The descriptions are vivid enough to paint a rich picture in your mind's eye; I could almost feel the wind whipping through the clouds as the dragons soared. The characters, while perhaps not deeply complex, are engaging and relatable, particularly the young boy caught in the crossfire of this epic struggle. His connection to his dragon friend brought an emotional depth that resonated with me, and I found myself genuinely invested in their fate.

While the story is primarily aimed at younger readers, I think older readers will appreciate the underlying themes. It's a story about prejudice, the importance of understanding before judging, and the potential for both good and evil to exist in all beings, even magnificent dragons. The author's commitment to world-building is evident, and the creation of Albion, a kingdom ripe with both danger and wonder, is impressive. The origins of thunder and lightning as explained within the narrative feel both imaginative and satisfyingly woven into the overarching plot.

However, some aspects could be improved. Several reviewers have noted repetitive phrasing and inconsistencies in the writing style, which occasionally disrupted the flow. This slightly detracts from the overall experience, though the compelling storyline largely compensates. For a first edition, it's understandable that there might be some rough edges, and I anticipate that future editions will benefit from some polishing and editing. Despite this, the book’s strengths overwhelmingly outweighed its minor weaknesses.

Overall, "Dragons in the Clouds" is a delightful fantasy adventure that delivers on its promise of excitement and wonder. It’s the kind of book that sparks the imagination and leaves you wanting more. I highly recommend it for young readers seeking a captivating escape, and even for adults who enjoy a well-told fantasy tale with heart. It’s a charming story, full of memorable moments and a satisfying resolution (though I wouldn’t mind seeing more adventures from these characters!). David Blair has clearly crafted a world worth revisiting, and I look forward to seeing what he comes up with next.

Information

  • Dimensions: 6 x 0.33 x 9 inches
  • Language: English
  • Print length: 152
  • Publication date: 2024
  • Publisher: Bookwave Publishing